Task 1
First, please get your work onto your blog. Second, please re-organize your blog so that it is easy to navigate
Good research which does have some sense of inspiring the final piece. The production is very busy and while this does demonstrate a solid work ethic, sometimes less is more. Remember, this is intended to be a fashion magazine, so the sensibilities of the audience will probably be more biased toward carefully designed covers with chic looking fonts and sell lines. That said, I do like the way you have used the lines created by the sell lines in a good way. A decent attempt.
Task 2:
Your whole group did an excellent job with the photography and I hope that you really learned a lot from it; you seem to have. I'm particularly impressed by the thoughtful way that you have assessed each picture and considered its effectiveness. This will really help you to produce A grade photography, which is the hardest part of getting our production to a high level.
Your next task is to amalgamate these two skills into the music magazine mock assessment. Really focus the design features, especially on the website. Try to make your finished product look as much like a real magazine and website as you can.
You seem to be heading for an A grade in this section of the course. Well done so far.
